The New Body Art

The New Body Art

Nowadays, the new body art is the big trend, especially in famous people's life, so lots of celebrities are having painted an illusion on to their skins by skin illustrators. I like this new body art because unlike tattooing, paint is temporary, so people can change their illusions after two weeks, and also they can ildulge their apperance without any regret. Therefore, a lot of women are having the body paint done for special parties. They can painted it anywhere they want on their skin; for example, their neck or chest so it looks like they are wearing a necklace or on their fit so it looks like they are wearing a very nice shoes or boots. Another point is that body art affects the film and the music industry. To illustrate, the music industry is using it for video shoots and album covers. Moreover, artist and skin illustrator Emma Hack has just made a short body art film for Estee Lau der. She says the process of body painting can take eight to 15 hours and requires extraordinary eye and hand co-ordination. Once the desing is complete, she photographs it. Her images of naked models merging into vintage wallpapers are arresting, unexpected and very beautiful. I chose this topic because the new body art is so popular and it takes nearly everyones attention especially celebrities. I most like the boots which painted on fit as it is very beautiful, and I think every girl will like it also. In addition, I would like to see a body art excibitions if I have chanse. How about you would you want to see them, I think it will worse to seeing them.

Bad teacher

Our aim is to be a perfect teacher not a bad teacher.

I chose this film because I like the film so much and it releates to our future job. When we become a teacher we should do our best not just like the teacher in the film. The main character of this film does not like being a teacher but she had to do it for her living, so she using her job for only living and finding a rich man. In the beginning she did not do anything in the class but showed films to students. However, when she heared that in the final exam there has a big money gift to teacher whos students do the best. Then she decided to win that money and started to teaching the students, but there was so little time that she could not teach all thing that students must know. Then she decided to get the answer shits of the exam paper. She could do it and her students were successfull and she got the money. Moreover, there were other teacher who loved t studentsheir job and they did their best to teaching students. In the end of the film she understood that she was wrong and she released that the money and rich husband are not so important things in life. I think we should learn lots of things in this film because we will be teacher one day. We should do our job by heart and pay attention to our students about their life and studing, and of course help them choose the right way in their life. İf we do our job by heart and give importance to students and other people we can be the perfect teacher. I agree with the car washing activity in the film because it is good thing doing activity with the students if the money is given to the schoool. I think that perfect teachers are significant to society because children take their initial knowledge of everything from their teachers.   LET IS BE THE PERFECT TEACHER!!!

Exercises

1. Our beagle loves to hunt. If someone opens the back door for her, she barrels down porch steps into the yard. Then she runs back and forth across the lawn in ecstasy, and her nose cruises the wet grass for smells. These are smells of cats, rabbits, and other presences too subtle for human detection. She sniffs and spins her tail in quick circles which spins clockwise first and then  counterclockwise. These two activities always occur together. They are sniffing and spinning which seem to propel her along.

2. The Government Printing Office in Washington D.C., is a source of much useful information, but few people know about it. It is the official publishing house for the federal government, so the GPO publishes pamphlets and books on a vast number of subjects. These subjects range from the dangers of X-rays from home TV sets to the identification of mushrooms. About 27,000 publications are offered through the Superintendent of Documents, because many of them are inexpensive. However, there is no charge at all for some of them.
 
3. A man who was John Jacob Astor reaped America's first fortune. He was a German immigrant and he made his initial money trading Indian furs. He was lowborn, uneducated, and he never learned to speak English properly. He carried on his business to the end in an accent, which was redolent of the Hamburg gutters.

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FLE 133 ERROR ANALYSIS WORKSHEET  FOR SECTION 04

Directions: You need to identify, describe and correct the errors in each sentence. There might be more than one error in each case.

SENTENCES WITH ERRORS	ERROR CATEGORY / CATEGORIES	NAME/DESCRIPTION OF ERROR	CORRECTION
When i come turkey and staying at campus in metu i begon to learn living alone far from my family	other errors global errors	(verb incorrectly formed)/wrong verb pattern	When I came Turkey and started staying at campus in METU I began to learn how to live alone far from my family.
We do not have enough tıme to participate in communities which include just METU student because  heavy lesson.	local errors other errors global errors	incorrect word choıce  missing preposition  problem wıth the singular or plural	We do not have enough time to participate in communities which include just METU students because of heavy lesson.
Only, with this maybe  I can feel a university student.	local errors other errors	incorrect word choice unclear incorrect use of comma	Only with this, may be  I can feel a university student.
Moreover, there were other teacher whom loved their job and they did their best to teaching student.	global errors local errors	missing article wrong article incomplete sentence singular/plural verb incorrectly formed incorrect relative	Moreover, there were other teachers who loved their job and they did their best to teaching the students.
I think we had to learn lots of things in this film because we one day  will be  teacher.	global errors local errors	incorrect word order Incorrect formation of   a modal missing arcicle	I think we should learn lots of things in this film because we will be a teacher one day.
I want to be one of best my field in.	local error global error	missing article incorrect sentence structure	I want to be one of the best in my field.